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Class Participants Write......Dear Gila

Hi, Gila! Hope you are well. Just wanted you to know about a flash market that’s very writer-friendly, a good place to land for some of your flash students who are looking for their first publishing credit (or have a good piece that doesn’t seem to fit with other markets):  Every Day Fiction .  I just had a piece published there ( http://www.everydayfiction. com/campaign-button-by-joyce- barton/ ), and here was my experience: -Their response time was reasonable (90 days is their max; I heard from them in 88) -All 6 of their editors gave me comments/feedback on my story. -I was given the opportunity to make changes based on the feedback before publication, if I wished to do so (had a nice back-and-forth with one of the editors and added a sentence as a result) -Readers can comment and rate your story (1 to 5 stars), and the writer has the opportunity...
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It's not too early to think about fall classes

Fall Classes Begin October 5 and registration is open: FLASH FICTION WORKSHOP  by Gila Green HOW TO PUBLISH A SHORT STORY WORKSHOP  by Gila Green CREATE MEMORABLE WRITING WITH LITERARY DEVICES  by Gila Green CREATE MEMORABLE WRITING WITH LITERARY DEVICES II  by Gila Green Need a little more time to catch your breath from summer? For the first time I'm offering two sets of fall classes. No need to wait for winter, but you can still pause a little longer than usual this year: November 16, 2015 registration is open  CREATE MEMORABLE WRITING WITH LITERARY DEVICES  by Gila Green CREATE MEMORABLE WRITING WITH LITERARY DEVICES II  by Gila Green HOW TO PUBLISH A SHORT STORY WORKSHOP  by Gila Green FLASH FICTION WORKSHOP  by Gila Green

Shshsh. I’m a Writer.

The summer writing season has begun. If you would like a post on any particular topic, please send me your request. I'd be happy to consider it.  Summer post by Gila Green I have a confession. When I fill out forms in my kids’ schools or any other official forms —for some reason only schools seem to come to mind, but that’s another post—I always write ‘housewife’ under mother’s occupation and I instruct my husband to do the same. He always nudges me in the ribs with the same expression on his face, his jaw slightly lowered, his eyes at a half roll. “Because” I hiss at his unasked question. “How many times do I have to tell you?” This is normally enough for him to shrug his shoulders and follow my instructions.  Would that all marital conflicts resolve themselves so easily. So, why don’t I put in writer or even...
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Letters

Dear Gila, BH my book will be delivered to me this week in print.   This is the link.  http://www.mazoproducts.com/ cat/index.php?main_page= product_info&products_id=276 It was wonderful working together and I greatly appreciate all the help and advice you provided me with, even after the editing was completed. Good luck with all of your future pursuits, Love Chana. Dear Gila, Here's the link to my short fiction piece - Silent Partners. The WOW! quarterly contests are a great way to get motivated and test your skills. I appreciate your interest so please feel free to share it with your Flash class. I would be grateful for any feedback/critique you or your class would like to offer!  http://www.wow-womenonwriting. com/63-FE1-Fall14Contest.html Thanks, Andrea 

Spring classes begin April 15, 2015

There is still time to sign up !

Spring Classes start April 15, 2015

There is still time to sign up!

Congratulations to ...

Carol Ungar on the upcoming publication of her cookbook Jewish Soul Food: Traditional Fare and What it Means.  Dear Gila, I couldn't have done it without you! Carol Ungar It was fun editing a cookbook for the first time, if not a little fattening, but it improved my cooking skills and it's always a pleasure to work with Carol. Mazal tov! I look forward to part two. And to Pia Wolcowitz on the release of her novel The Nurse . Thank you for everything, Pia  It was a pleasure to edit this novel and I wish Pia much success! I look forward to her next jump into adult women's fiction. Chana Bunim Rubin Ausubel whose memoir As Long as the Candle Burns is coming out this spring with Mazo Publishers. Thank you for choosing me as your editor, Chana. Your work is an important part of American Jewish history.  Dear Gila...
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Flash into the Middle of Things or In Media Res

Flash into the Middle of Things by Gila Green Why do writers use in media res (Latin for “into the middle of things”)?  There is nothing new about this narrative technique, which we find in everything from Homer’s Odyssey to films, poetry and plays. In media res is neither a frame nor a story within a story nor a self-contained story. In media res allows the audience to jump into a story right in the middle of the action. If done well, the audience is quickly consumed by the narrative, even though many questions are unanswered. For example, if a story begins with a murder we do not know the victim, the motive, whose side we are on, but our curiosity is immediately addressed. In Flash fiction in media res can be particularly useful because of the very short word count allowed. Yet, I find many writers find it difficult to...
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Does Your Story Have a Case of Runaway Pace? By Gila Green

Have you ever seen any of these comments in the margins of your work? ·                      Slow down ·                      Uneven ·                      Lacks climax ·                      Flat If you answered “yes,” you should immediately browse through your writer’s toolbox of literary devices for pacing solutions—specifically how to slow the pace down. One device many writers threw out of their toolboxes long ago was indirect writing.  Most of us were told by everyone from our high school English teachers to published writers in creative writing programs that direct writing is good writing and indirect writing is bad writing. That’s often true. But completely eliminating indirect writing is also a surefire way for many writers to ruin the pace of their work. They write each line so directly that the story is over before it begins; there is never any time to savor the scene, in particular the climax or mini climaxes;...
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Congratulations to Joyce Barton

Hi, Gila!  Just wanted to let you know that my first flash piece,  Bar Rag , was published by  The Legendary  (an online literary journal).  Less than a year after taking your course, not bad. ;) Go here & click on 'Joyce Barton' link:   http://www. downdirtyword.com/fictionpage. html (Or you can access it from the bio page:  http://www. downdirtyword.com/authors/ joycebarton.html  ) Just wanted to say thanks again; your class helped me get started with flash, and now I'm on my way. Hope you are well, and Happy New Year! ~Joyce

Forget the Rules! Take a Flash Fiction Break By Gila Green

When I tell people I teach a virtual flash fiction course, I often get strange responses bordering on laughter. Isn’t flash fiction just really short fiction? What’s the point of taking a specific Flash class? No, flash is its own genre deserving of its own class and in my opinion, it’s still underrated as a way to break into publication. But the increasing number of publication opportunities is only one benefit of Flash. It also offers a break to a lot of writers who might be burnt out with a novel or short story. In the main, you get a break from following those longer-length piece rules and who doesn’t need a break from ‘the rules’ once in a while to recharge?   Here are five rules most of us hear over and over again that you get to completely ignore in Flash: Tell don’t show. If you’re like me, you’re...
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Allusion in Flash fiction: double your meaning in a single Flash

Allusion in Flash fiction: double your meaning in a single Flash
This is the first in my blog post series on writing, particularly flash fiction. This post was on the WOW-Women on Writing site in 2013. Many writers think ‘brief’ these days. Short fiction is popular both on the internet and in print and whether you call it flash, postcard or micro fiction it all comes down to your story’s bottom line: reduce your work to its barest bones. One guideline is to eliminate literary devices. We are told that although we may write: “ He was Usain Bolt in his running shoes, sprinting towards the hospital.” This is a no-no in flash. Change this to : He sprinted to the hospital. You just went from eleven to five words. This advice saves the writer six precious words. It also ups the story’s pace, intensifying the drama and focus and flash fiction is nothing if not about focus. What about the meaning...
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Create Memorable Writing. Four new classes begin January 12

My new writing class Create Memorable Writing has been updated and revised. Mark January 12 on your calendars. Enamored with the new short writing trend? Sign up for Flash Fiction Short on time? Try my four-week short story mini publishing workshop

New Fall Classes

Classes in Flash Fiction and Literary Devices Begin October 27. Sign up for Flash Sign up for Literary Devices I NEW: Mini Course. How to Publish a Short Story. Loved Literary Devices I? Sign up for part two. 

The Costume Room

My short story The Costume Room was a finalist for WordSmitten's 1010 Fiction Contest. Today Brian Henry posted it on his blog.

My Writing Process Blog Tour

Thanks so much to Yael Shahar author of A Damaged Mirror, who invited me to participate in the current My Writing Process Blog Tour . Yael describes her book as an exploration between right and wrong; between choice and choicelessness, and the consequences of crossing boundaries. Check it out! This tour asks four questions that each writer answers before she passes on the virtual torch, so here goes: What am I working on? I just finished my second novel, Passport Control. I’m really excited about it as it is my longest work and I feel for me it means I have finally crossed the line from short story writer to novelist. Although, I have already published one novel King of the Class I was undergoing a transition with that novel from years of writing only short stories and some poetry. This time around I no longer had the ghost of a...
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Summer Registration for Flash Fiction is Open

http://wow-womenonwriting.com/classroom/GilaGreen_FlashFictionWorkshop.php

Pithom and Ramses in CommuterLit

My humor flash piece Pithom and Ramses  appears in CommuterLit this week.

Summer Registration Open

Registration is open for new virtual classes beginning July 8. Bring your short fiction, novel or memoir up to publication level and meet writers from all over the world from your own home or office computer. Flash Fiction :  http://wow-womenonwriting. com/classroom/GilaGreen_ FlashFictionWorkshop.php Literary Devices I:  http://wow-womenonwriting. com/classroom/GilaGreen_ LiteraryDevicesI.php Literary Devices II:  http://wow-womenonwriting.com/ classroom/GilaGreen_ LiteraryDevicesII.php Since 2009, more than 100 writers have taken my classes from the USA, Israel, Canada, UK, Australia and South Africa. Many have gone on to publish, to win writing awards and to find online writing partners.

Spider Places in Dublin

My short story Spider Places will be published in Ireland's The South Circular in their ninth issue on March 20, 2014. thesouthcircular.com

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White Zion

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