7 Signs Your Manuscript Needs a Developmental Editor (Before You Query or Self-Publish)

So you've written a manuscript—congratulations! Whether you're planning to query agents or self-publish, you want your book to be as strong as possible. But how do you know if it's ready? A developmental editor helps shape your story's structure, characters, pacing, and themes, ensuring your book is compelling and polished. If you're on the fence about hiring one, here are seven signs your manuscript might need a developmental edit:

Sometimes, a manuscript doesn't feel quite right, but you're too close to the material to see what's wrong. Maybe the tension fizzles, or the emotional beats aren't landing. A developmental editor can diagnose the issue and offer solutions.

If your beta readers can't agree on what works and what doesn't—or they only say, "I liked it!" without specifics—it may mean your story needs clearer structure, stronger character arcs, or more engaging stakes. An editor provides professional, targeted feedback.

Do your characters act in ways that don't align with their motivations? Are they too passive, too perfect, or lacking depth? A developmental editor can help refine character arcs, backstory integration, and emotional depth so your characters feel real and relatable.

Does the story drag in the middle? Are action scenes over too quickly? Pacing issues can make or break a book. A developmental editor helps balance tension and flow, ensuring your readers stay engaged from start to finish.

Unresolved subplots, inconsistencies, or unclear motivations can frustrate readers. If you suspect your story has gaps but can't figure out how to patch them, an editor can help tighten the narrative and ensure every thread is woven seamlessly.

Great books have underlying themes that resonate with readers. If your theme feels buried or unclear, a developmental editor can help you bring it to the surface in a way that enhances the story without feeling heavy-handed.

If you've rewritten scenes, changed endings, or reworked characters but still feel something is missing, fresh eyes can make a difference. A developmental editor brings objectivity and expertise to help shape your manuscript into its best version.

If any of these signs sound familiar, a developmental edit could be exactly what your manuscript needs. An editor doesn't just point out problems—they provide solutions to make your book stronger, more engaging, and more marketable. Investing in a developmental edit now can save you time, frustration, and future rewrites.

Need help? Let's talk about your manuscript! Contact me today to see how we can refine your story together.