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Can Your Short Story or Personal Essay Become a Memoir?

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Writers are not looking for someone to fix commas. They are looking for a guide who understands story shape, emotional pacing, and cultural authenticity.  And How the Right Editor Helps You Turn a Moment Into a Book When One Story Refuses to Stay Small Sometimes a short piece will not stay contained. You write a personal essay about your grand...

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The One Editing Tool Most Writers Underuse: The Search Function

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The Search function is the fastest way to spot patterns you can't see while reading straight through Between writing academic syllabi, deciding which courses to teach, and experimenting with new teaching technologies—VR rooms, 3D environments, AI programs (learning Zoom already feels like last century)—I haven't had much time for long blog posts. S...

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Unleashing Creativity: 5 Ways to Spark Your Writing

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"Switching time, place, or point of view can reignite your creativity faster than waiting for inspiration to strike."  I've been deep in other projects lately, but I didn't want this space to go quiet. Here's a favorite post from the archives that still feels as true as ever — because every writer needs a spark now and then. Repost from the Ar...

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Editing as Teshuva: What Happens When You Skip It and How to Repair

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"Editing is not punishment. It is permission to begin again, just as teshuva allows us to return, repair, and renew." Rosh Hashanah is not only a date on the calendar. It is an invitation to pause, reflect, and begin again. In Jewish tradition, this holiday season calls us to teshuva: to return, to repair, and to renew. As writers, our manuscripts ...

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Should Jewish Writers Keep Publishing in an Age of Rising Antisemitism?

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When one Jewish writer publishes a novel that refuses to disappear, it signals to others: You can too. Over the past couple of years, many Jewish writers have quietly asked me the same question: Is it worth it to keep publishing Jewish stories right now? With antisemitism in publishing on the rise, in mainstream politics, on social media,...

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Jewish Holidays as Story Structure: What Writers Can Learn from the Jewish Calendar

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"The Jewish year isn't just a cycle of holidays; it's a story structure waiting to be written." As writers, we're always searching for structure: beats, arcs, acts, tension curves. We study Save the Cat, the Hero's Journey, and Freytag's Pyramid. But what if the narrative rhythm we crave is already embedded in something far older: the Jew...

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Writer's Desk Totems: The Surprising Objects That Power Our Creativity

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"Not every desk totem needs to be poetic—some of us write our best scenes next to a Viking duck." What's on your desk might say more about your writing life than you think. Writers are creatures of creativity, habit, and—let's admit it—just a touch of superstition. While some claim they can write anywhere with nothing but a laptop and a strong ...

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Editing Jewish Characters: What to Keep, What to Question, and What to Amplify

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Jewish identity often is ambivalent and that's the truth of it. A few years ago, a fellow writer sent me a short story for feedback. It featured a Jewish character who, strangely, had no cultural or emotional ties to anything remotely Jewish. This included no references to Jewish family rituals or appellations , food,  holidays, not ...

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Writing Jewish Characters: Identity, Authenticity, and Avoiding Stereotypes

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"A beta reader for With A Good Eye once told me she didn't know not all Jews were rich. That sentence stayed with me."  Writing Jewish Characters: Identity, Authenticity, and Avoiding Stereotypes by Gila Green After I posted about the difference between Jewish fiction and Jewish-themed fiction, and later shared the journey of taking a Jew...

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Editing Case Study: How One Jewish-Themed Novel Went from Raw Draft to Ready for Publication

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Jewish-themed fiction lives in the details. Bringing Jewish Fiction to Life Jewish-themed fiction offers rich, layered storytelling, but capturing that depth on the page can be challenging. Many writers struggle to balance cultural authenticity with narrative flow, or to communicate Jewish rituals without slowing the pace. In this editing case...

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What’s the Difference Between Jewish Fiction and Jewish-Themed Fiction?

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What's the Difference Between Jewish Fiction and Jewish-Themed Fiction? (And Why It Matters for Writers and Readers) If you're writing a book that includes Jewish characters, history, or themes, you may have asked yourself a surprisingly tricky question: Is my work Jewish fiction—or just Jewish-themed fiction? It might seem like splitting hairs, bu...

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Shavuot Writing Ideas: 5 Prompts for Fiction, Memoir, and More

Shavuot Writing Ideas: 5 Prompts for Fiction, Memoir, and More "Open book and wheat stalks on rustic table – symbolizing creativity, Jewish tradition, and the harvest themes of Shavuot."

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Ikea Hacks for Creating Your Perfect Writing Nook: Affordable Writing Space Ideas for Writers

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"Affordable Ikea hacks to upgrade your writing nook and boost your creativity!"  Are you looking for affordable ways to create a writing nook or design a productive writing space at home? Whether you're a novelist, blogger, or journaler, having a dedicated writing nook can boost your creativity and writing productivity. But not everyone has ex...

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How Do I Find My Voice If I'm Writing in More Than One?

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  Struggling to find your writing voice when juggling multiple characters or genres? Learn how to stay authentic while writing in more than one voice—and why your unique voice still matters. Why Writing in Multiple Voices Is a Modern Writer's Dilemma If you've ever asked yourself, "How do I find my writing voice?" you're not alone. But what ha...

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Finding Your Perfect Space to Write: From Libraries to Cafés to IKEA (and Even on Vacation!)

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Looking for the best spaces to write? Discover inspiring places for writers, from libraries and parks to cafés, IKEA cafeterias, and even vacation spots. For many writers, finding the right space to write can be almost as important as the writing itself. A good environment sets the mood, helps you focus, and often sparks the kind of inspiration tha...

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What's in a Name? Navigating Affectionate Naming in Memoir Writing

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Memoir writers do not need to choose just one name for each character—as long as the variation serves the emotional logic of the text. Memoir writing is a delicate blend of truth-telling and storytelling. It demands both the precision of memory and the fluidity of emotion. And one surprisingly complex decision memoirists often face is: what do...

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Stories We Tell Ourselves: How Writers Use Storytelling to Explore Memory and Identity

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As both a writer and editor, I've learned that the most powerful stories about identity and memory are often hidden in the second or third draft.  by Gila Green As a writer, I've long been drawn to characters who carry fragmented memories and fractured identities—those who question where they come from and what parts of their past they're will...

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7 Punctuation Fixes to Spring-Clean Your Writing

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"Tidying up punctuation is a simple, powerful way to make your prose shine." Spring is the season of clarity—fresh air, open windows, and the urge to declutter. But what about your writing? If you're polishing a short story, revising your novel, or getting ready to submit your manuscript, don't overlook one of the easiest ways to level up your pros...

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4 Ways to Spring Clean Your Writing and Refresh Your Creativity

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Spring cleaning isn't just for your home—refresh your writing, declutter your drafts, and bring new energy to your creativity! spring clean your writing editing tips for writers how to improve writing clarity how to remove filler words how to organize writing projects best writing tools for organization time management for writers self-editing tips...

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4 Storytelling Lessons Every Writer Can Learn from the Passover Haggadah

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The Passover Haggadah is a masterclass in storytelling—repetition, engagement, and character development at its finest. Passover Haggadah storytelling lessons storytelling techniques writing tips fiction writing nonfiction writing memoir writing character development engaging readers how to keep readers hooked writing strategies storytelling strate...

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5 Common Writing Mistakes Jewish Authors Make and How to Avoid Them

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Never assume that cultural boundaries are strict or unbreakable—they're often much more porous than we think. Jewish book editor Jewish sensitivity reader Writing about Jewish culture Jewish religious practices in books Writing Jewish characters Hebrew-speaking editor Ladino editor Arabic-speaking editor Avoiding cultural mistakes in writing Jewish...

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How to Choose the Right Editor for Your Book: A Guide for Jewish and Non-Jewish Writers

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As a sensitivity reader for HarperCollins Middle Grade, for example, I identified issues with an Israeli character whose syntax was incorrectly identical to that of an English speaker. I revised the dialogue to reflect authentic Israeli speech patterns, ensuring a more realistic portrayal. Another client had inaccurate religious references for Amer...

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​5 Tips for Writing Romance That Will Tug at Your Readers' Heartstrings This Valentine's Day

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While grand gestures can be memorable, it's often the small, everyday moments that define a romance. Valentine's Day is the perfect time to celebrate love—and for writers, it's a chance to explore the complexities of romance in your stories. Whether you're working on a romantic short story, writing a love novel, or just brainstorming new romance st...

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​10 Ways a Writing Coach Can Save You Time and Money During Your Writing Journey

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A full manuscript critique or developmental edit can be expensive, especially if your book still needs major structural work. A writing coach helps you fix big-picture issues—plot holes, pacing problems, weak character arcs—before you hire an editor. Writing a book is no small feat, and many writers underestimate just how long the process can take....

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7 Signs Your Manuscript Needs a Developmental Editor (Before You Query or Self-Publish)

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If your theme feels buried or unclear, a developmental editor can help you bring it to the surface in a way that enhances the story without feeling heavy-handed. So you've written a manuscript—congratulations! Whether you're planning to query agents or self-publish, you want your book to be as strong as possible. But how do you know if it's ready? ...

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The Power of Writing from Personal Experience: Balancing Authenticity with Fiction

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As writers, we often turn to our own lives for inspiration. Whether it's a particularly challenging relationship, a memory that has stayed with us, or even the quiet moments of daily life, our personal experiences shape the foundation of much of what we write. The beauty of writing from life lies in its authenticity—there's an emotional truth that ...

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Balancing Acts: How to Transition Seamlessly Between Editing and Writing

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Writing is about creation—pouring out ideas and crafting stories or arguments from scratch. It's an exercise in exploration, where imperfection is part of the process. Editing, on the other hand, is about refinement. As both an editor and a writer, I often find myself navigating two very different worlds. Editing requires precision, objectivity, an...

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Should Chapters Have Names?

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 Naming chapters is not a must for every manuscript, but it can enhance your storytelling if done thoughtfully.  When it comes to naming chapters in your manuscript, the choice is ultimately yours. However, different genres often have different expectations when it comes to chapter titles. Here's a breakdown of whether or not chapters sho...

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How to Use Headings and Subheadings to Organize and Enhance Your Writing

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Too many headings can distract from your writing. Use them where they add value and structure. Headings and subheadings are essential tools in any writer's toolkit. Whether you are writing for print, the web, or a manuscript, these simple tools can improve readability, structure, and engagement with your audience. Here's how to effectively use head...

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How to Use Zoom to Get the Most Out of Your Meeting with Your Editor

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I want to review some key takeaways to help you get the most out of your meetings with your editor in 2025. In 2024, I had numerous Zoom meetings with writers across various genres—fiction, nonfiction, and academic writing. During these sessions, I've seen a lot of different approaches, and I want to review some key takeaways to help you get the mo...

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