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Writers are not looking for someone to fix commas. They are looking for a guide who understands story shape, emotional pacing, and cultural authenticity.  And How the Right Editor Helps You Turn a Moment Into a Book When One Story Refuses to Stay Small Sometimes a short piece will not stay contained. You write a personal essay about your grand...

Every author's journey is different, but one thing remains constant — thoughtful editing can transform a story and strengthen a writer's voice. Here are a few success stories from authors I've had the privilege to work with. Eleanor Thalheimer-- travel writer, Lonely Planet's Cycling Italy, Hop in the Saddle: A Guide to Portland's Craft B...

The Search function is the fastest way to spot patterns you can't see while reading straight through Between writing academic syllabi, deciding which courses to teach, and experimenting with new teaching technologies—VR rooms, 3D environments, AI programs (learning Zoom already feels like last century)—I haven't had much time for long blog posts. S...

"Switching time, place, or point of view can reignite your creativity faster than waiting for inspiration to strike."  I've been deep in other projects lately, but I didn't want this space to go quiet. Here's a favorite post from the archives that still feels as true as ever — because every writer needs a spark now and then. Repost from the Ar...

"Editing is not punishment. It is permission to begin again, just as teshuva allows us to return, repair, and renew." Rosh Hashanah is not only a date on the calendar. It is an invitation to pause, reflect, and begin again. In Jewish tradition, this holiday season calls us to teshuva: to return, to repair, and to renew. As writers, our manuscripts ...

When one Jewish writer publishes a novel that refuses to disappear, it signals to others: You can too. Over the past couple of years, many Jewish writers have quietly asked me the same question: Is it worth it to keep publishing Jewish stories right now? With antisemitism in publishing on the rise, in mainstream politics, on social media,...

"The Jewish year isn't just a cycle of holidays; it's a story structure waiting to be written." As writers, we're always searching for structure: beats, arcs, acts, tension curves. We study Save the Cat, the Hero's Journey, and Freytag's Pyramid. But what if the narrative rhythm we crave is already embedded in something far older: the Jew...

"Not every desk totem needs to be poetic—some of us write our best scenes next to a Viking duck." What's on your desk might say more about your writing life than you think. Writers are creatures of creativity, habit, and—let's admit it—just a touch of superstition. While some claim they can write anywhere with nothing but a laptop and a strong ...

"AI can assist with precision and speed, but it's the human editor who adds the emotional resonance, cultural insight, and authenticity that truly connect with readers." Artificial intelligence is transforming the way we approach editing. Tools like Grammarly, ProWritingAid, and even AI-powered copyediting software are now essential parts of a writ...

July in the Golan

A good edit doesn't cool the emotion; it channels it.  Every July, my inbox fills up just as the weather hits its peak. Clients from Jerusalem, New York, Melbourne, and Montreal all send me drafts they've finally had time to face. Whether they're sweating it out in a Tel Aviv apartment or working under a ceiling fan in Brooklyn, something...

Jewish identity often is ambivalent and that's the truth of it. A few years ago, a fellow writer sent me a short story for feedback. It featured a Jewish character who, strangely, had no cultural or emotional ties to anything remotely Jewish. This included no references to Jewish family rituals or appellations , food,  holidays, not ...

"A beta reader for With A Good Eye once told me she didn't know not all Jews were rich. That sentence stayed with me."  Writing Jewish Characters: Identity, Authenticity, and Avoiding Stereotypes by Gila Green After I posted about the difference between Jewish fiction and Jewish-themed fiction, and later shared the journey of taking a Jew...

Jewish-themed fiction lives in the details. Bringing Jewish Fiction to Life Jewish-themed fiction offers rich, layered storytelling, but capturing that depth on the page can be challenging. Many writers struggle to balance cultural authenticity with narrative flow, or to communicate Jewish rituals without slowing the pace. In this editing case...

What's the Difference Between Jewish Fiction and Jewish-Themed Fiction? (And Why It Matters for Writers and Readers) If you're writing a book that includes Jewish characters, history, or themes, you may have asked yourself a surprisingly tricky question: Is my work Jewish fiction—or just Jewish-themed fiction? It might seem like splitting hairs, bu...

"Open book and wheat stalks on rustic table – symbolizing creativity, Jewish tradition, and the harvest themes of Shavuot."

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"Affordable Ikea hacks to upgrade your writing nook and boost your creativity!"  Are you looking for affordable ways to create a writing nook or design a productive writing space at home? Whether you're a novelist, blogger, or journaler, having a dedicated writing nook can boost your creativity and writing productivity. But not everyone has ex...

 Hi Gila, I just wanted to add something that I somehow forget to mention, your editing is fantastic! Absolutely beautiful!Thanks very much! I very much appreciate it!Love Frank Frank Genao San Francisco, CA Author of dozens of books, including Misha: Book 1: A Post-Apocalyptic Novel About A Father and Son's Fight to Survive (Misha: A Post-Apo...

  Struggling to find your writing voice when juggling multiple characters or genres? Learn how to stay authentic while writing in more than one voice—and why your unique voice still matters. Why Writing in Multiple Voices Is a Modern Writer's Dilemma If you've ever asked yourself, "How do I find my writing voice?" you're not alone. But what ha...

It's hard to concentrate on a plot twist or character arc when you know a siren is about to go off. Living and writing in Israel during a time of war presents a very specific set of challenges. One of the most disorienting is the randomness of Code Red alerts. These sirens are not only sudden and alarming, but lately, they're preceded by texts that...

Looking for the best spaces to write? Discover inspiring places for writers, from libraries and parks to cafés, IKEA cafeterias, and even vacation spots. For many writers, finding the right space to write can be almost as important as the writing itself. A good environment sets the mood, helps you focus, and often sparks the kind of inspiration tha...

Memoir writers do not need to choose just one name for each character—as long as the variation serves the emotional logic of the text. Memoir writing is a delicate blend of truth-telling and storytelling. It demands both the precision of memory and the fluidity of emotion. And one surprisingly complex decision memoirists often face is: what do...

 Writing Prompt: Think back to the way people used to communicate when you were younger. Was it by letter, landline, or something else entirely? Describe the feel of it: the waiting, the handwriting, the voice on the other end. What memory rises up? As we move through May—a month that always seems to invite reflection—I find myself t...

As both a writer and editor, I've learned that the most powerful stories about identity and memory are often hidden in the second or third draft.  by Gila Green As a writer, I've long been drawn to characters who carry fragmented memories and fractured identities—those who question where they come from and what parts of their past they're will...

"Tidying up punctuation is a simple, powerful way to make your prose shine." Spring is the season of clarity—fresh air, open windows, and the urge to declutter. But what about your writing? If you're polishing a short story, revising your novel, or getting ready to submit your manuscript, don't overlook one of the easiest ways to level up your pros...

Spring cleaning isn't just for your home—refresh your writing, declutter your drafts, and bring new energy to your creativity! spring clean your writing editing tips for writers how to improve writing clarity how to remove filler words how to organize writing projects best writing tools for organization time management for writers self-editing tips...

The Passover Haggadah is a masterclass in storytelling—repetition, engagement, and character development at its finest. Passover Haggadah storytelling lessons storytelling techniques writing tips fiction writing nonfiction writing memoir writing character development engaging readers how to keep readers hooked writing strategies storytelling strate...

 Industry & Advocacy News from the Author's Guild  Occasionally, I repost valuable information for authors and editors. You'll have to click on the link for the full story. From the Author's Guild website:  March 6, 2024 A new publishing company, launched by industry veterans, seeks to reshape the publishing model and put authors...

Never assume that cultural boundaries are strict or unbreakable—they're often much more porous than we think. Jewish book editor Jewish sensitivity reader Writing about Jewish culture Jewish religious practices in books Writing Jewish characters Hebrew-speaking editor Ladino editor Arabic-speaking editor Avoiding cultural mistakes in writing Jewish...

As a sensitivity reader for HarperCollins Middle Grade, for example, I identified issues with an Israeli character whose syntax was incorrectly identical to that of an English speaker. I revised the dialogue to reflect authentic Israeli speech patterns, ensuring a more realistic portrayal. Another client had inaccurate religious references for Amer...